What makes you brave especially when facing challenges in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Positive thing makes me to go right side not to have negative actions to all my life.
It also give me chances more closing with my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jack!
Good evening!
Thank you for answering your homework.
We\'re actually the same on this. I go with being positive or optimistic to be braver and do more positive things. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> A positive thing makes me go to the right side and not to have negative actions in my life.
It also give me chances more closing with my friends.
It also give me chances more closing with my friends.
>> It also gives me chances in getting more closer with my friends.
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