What makes you comfortable around people?
학생이 쓴 원문
First, background of the place makes me comfortable, specially green and yellow color with white line of the back wall beside the table.
Second, soft and kind convertation each other give us a successful relationship with other people and finally it makes our goal to the top.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ethan!
Thank you for submitting your thoughts about this question.
Indeed, if we feel comfortable with the place, it also helps us feel comfortable with the people who are with us.
The second one you mentioned is also one of the things I really consider.
I think having a smooth conversation really leads to a good relationship and goal. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> First, the background of the place makes me comfortable specially the green and yellow color with a white line of the back wall beside the table
Second, soft and kind convertation each other give us a successful relationship with other people and finally it makes our goal to the top.
Second, soft and kind convertation each other give us a successful relationship with other people and finally it makes our goal to the top.
>> Second, the soft and kind conversation to each other give us a successful relationship with other people and finally, it makes our goal to the top.
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