What makes you feel anxious?
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I feel anxious when I can’t be sure my ability about photograph. One day I have confident like I can do very well. But the other day I think I can’t do it and I don’t have talent. Even I think did I mischoose my major? Photographer is my dream since I was six. And I never think about other job after 11 years old. So I don’t know which other job is fit me and what should I do without photo. But I know photographers can’t make money. Everyone said like “passion pay”. It means if I have passion, I don’t need money. I am not sure I can live with that much money without my parents’ help. Also these day many people like photo and they enjoy it with only phone camera. Or someone who has passion of photo and they already got other job, then they can buy pretty expensive camera even more expensive than photographers’. So I always compare with the ideal and the real. The answer is already fixed but just think of the worst.
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Hello there Kayla!
Thank you for sharing your ideas in here.
Have a nice weekend.
I feel anxious when I can’t be sure my ability about photograph.
>>I feel anxious when I am not sure about my photography skills.
One day I have confident like I can do very well.
>>Some days, I am very confident and feel like I can do it very well.
But the other day I think I can’t do it and I don’t have talent.
>>But, on other days, I think I can\'t do it and I don\'t have a talent.
Even I think did I mischoose my major?
>>I even think that I chose the wrong major.
Photographer is my dream since I was six.
>>Photography has been my dream since I was six years old.
And I never think about other job after 11 years old.
>>I never thought about other jobs after I turned 11 years old.
So I don’t know which other job is fit me and what should I do without photo.
>>So, I don\'t know which job fits me and what I should do without photography.
But I know photographers can’t make money.
>>But I know that photographers don\'t make a lot of money.
Everyone said like “passion pay”.
>>Everyone says it is a \"passion pay\".
It means if I have passion, I don’t need money.
>>It means that if I have passion, I don\'t need money.
I am not sure I can live with that much money without my parents’ help.
>>I am not sure if I can live with that much money
Also these day many people like photo and they enjoy it with only phone camera.
>>These days, many people like taking photos and they enjoy it since it is only available in their mobile phone.
Or someone who has passion of photo and they already got other job, then they can buy pretty expensive camera even more expensive than photographers’.
>>People who have a passion for photography and have jobs can buy expensive cameras and are paid a larger amount of money.
So I always compare with the ideal and the real.
>>So, I always compare the ideal things and the real things.
The answer is already fixed but just think of the worst.
>>The answer is already fixed but I am just thinking about the worst thing that can happen.
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