What makes you feel better when you’re angry or depressed?
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Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!
What a fantastic way to feel better.
I want to try to go to a temple an isolated and tranquil location.
I think that one will be really great.
Being in a quiet place for awhile is really good.
Thanks for sharing your answers with me.
I hope that you will have some time to do the things you mentioned below.
See you.
Teacher Nina
It makes me feel better to talk with my friends over a glass of beer when I am angry or depressed.
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I can forget about the things that bother me while I’m having fun with friends.
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Exercising or planning sport games is also one of the best ways to relieve my anger.
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Going to a temple in an isolated and tranquil location and having time on praying or meditating would be helpful as well.
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Or we may visit a wholesale fishery or fruit & vegetable market that open at 2 or 3 o’clock in the morning.
>> Or we may visit a wholesale fishery or fruit & vegetable market that is open at 2 or 3 o’clock in the morning.
The marketplace is awake and full of vibes even when the other side of the world is sleeping.
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It is packed with vendors and always in the hustle and bustle.
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They often yell at each other to haggle over the price.
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Offsite auctions for a large volume of transaction also take place, which creates a tension among participants.
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We can easily recognize there how people are living their life to the fullest.
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My pain could be luxurious when compared with theirs.
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They might be in a much worse situation.
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