What makes you feel better when you’re angry or depressed?

2015-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

It makes me feel better to talk with my friends over a glass of beer when I am angry or depressed. I can forget about the things that bother me while I’m having fun with friends. Exercising or planning sport games is also one of the best ways to relieve my anger. Going to a temple in an isolated and tranquil location and having time on praying or meditating would be helpful as well. Or we may visit a wholesale fishery or fruit & vegetable market that open at 2 or 3 o’clock in the morning. The marketplace is awake and full of vibes even when the other side of the world is sleeping. It is packed with vendors and always in the hustle and bustle. They often yell at each other to haggle over the price. Offsite auctions for a large volume of transaction also take place, which creates a tension among participants. We can easily recognize there how people are living their life to the fullest. My pain could be luxurious when compared with theirs. They might be in a much worse situation.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Sir [이름]!

What a fantastic way to feel better.

I want to try to go to a temple an isolated and tranquil location.

I think that one will be really great.

Being in a quiet place for awhile is really good.

Thanks for sharing your answers with me.

I hope that you will have some time to do the things you mentioned below.
See you.
Teacher Nina


It makes me feel better to talk with my friends over a glass of beer when I am angry or depressed.

>> CORRECT

I can forget about the things that bother me while I’m having fun with friends.

>> CORRECT

Exercising or planning sport games is also one of the best ways to relieve my anger.

>> CORRECT

Going to a temple in an isolated and tranquil location and having time on praying or meditating would be helpful as well.

>> CORRECT

Or we may visit a wholesale fishery or fruit & vegetable market that open at 2 or 3 o’clock in the morning.

>> Or we may visit a wholesale fishery or fruit & vegetable market that is open at 2 or 3 o’clock in the morning.

The marketplace is awake and full of vibes even when the other side of the world is sleeping.

>> CORRECT

It is packed with vendors and always in the hustle and bustle.

>> CORRECT

They often yell at each other to haggle over the price.

>> CORRECT

Offsite auctions for a large volume of transaction also take place, which creates a tension among participants.

>> CORRECT

We can easily recognize there how people are living their life to the fullest.

>> CORRECT

My pain could be luxurious when compared with theirs.

>> CORRECT

They might be in a much worse situation.

>> CORRECT

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