What makes you feel happy and confident?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I feel happy in my life, it is being together with family member.
It give me energy and make us more outdoor activity.
Traveling with my family, many memories are remained in my heart. It also make a confidence to my children for their future. Having lots of talk time with my family, I am sure that we belive each other.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ethan!
Thank you once again for sharing your thoughts about my questions.
Good job as well in expressing yourself. I only found very minor corrections.
Keep it up!
Anyway, we have the same answer as well. Being with our family is really the best thing in life which gives us happiness and confidence. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> When I feel happy in my life, it is being together with a family member.
It give me energy and make us more outdoor activity.
It give me energy and make us more outdoor activity.
>> It gives me energy and make us do more outdoor activities.
Traveling with my family, many memories are remained in my heart.
Traveling with my family, many memories are remained in my heart.
>> CORRECT.
It also make a confidence to my children for their future.
>> It also gives confidence to my children for their future.
Having lots of talk time with my family, I am sure that we belive each other.
>> Having lots of talk time with my family, I am sure that we believe in each other.
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