What makes you happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are two things that makes me happy.
The first thing is my family feel happy.
The second thing is pay day.
It maks me very happy.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Eliana! ^_^
I definitely agree with you~
Pay day is the best!
Thank you for this.
- T. Rina
1. There are two things that makes me happy.
>> There are two things that make me happy.
>> There are two things that make me happy.
2. The first thing is my family feel happy.
>> The first thing is when my family feels happy.
>> The first thing is when my family feels happy.
3. The second thing is pay day.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
4. It maks me very happy.
>> It makes me very happy.
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