What makes you happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
first of all, when I eating delicious food I feel like happy. such as pasta and beef and steak
secondly, when I went to travel abroad. it is relaxing. particularly I like collect magnet in abroad
lastly, I like shopping. I\'m happy when I buy clothes fit me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Hailey! ^^
T[이름]k you so much for this.
T[이름]k you so much for this.
See you in class!
- T. Rina
1. first of all, when I eating delicious food I feel like happy. such as pasta and beef and steak
>> First of all, eating delicious food such as pasta, beef, and steak makes me happy.
2. secondly, when I went to travel abroad.
>> Secondly, travelling abroad makes me happy.
3. it is relaxing. particularly I like collect magnet in abroad
>> It is relaxing. I particularly like collecting magnets from other countries.
4. lastly, I like shopping.
4. lastly, I like shopping.
>> CORRECT!
5. I\'m happy when I buy clothes fit me.
>> I\'m happy when I buy clothes that fit me.
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