What makes you happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m very emotional person.
When I saw the clear blue-sky, It makes me happy.
And I heard my favorite songs or watching beautiful movies like \'About times\'.
It makes me happy!
Sometime I read the book that wrote by Hegasino gaico (I\'m not sure what is correctly spell that writer\'s name.)
Recently, I read the novel named \'miracles of the namiya store\'
It gave me touching and hearty.
Someday, My friend makes me happy.
Someday, My Lord makes me happy.(Thanks God.)
The small thing make me happy.
And I always keep my mind to positive and thankful.
Good night Sheila~
Thank u for your feedback.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Simon! You homework tonight is a good one to read. Thank you for sharing this to me. It\'s an honor to give you feedback.
Sometime I read the book that wrote by Hegasino gaico (I\'m not sure what is correctly spell that writer\'s name.)
Recently, I read the novel named \'miracles of the namiya store\'
The small thing make me happy.
And I always keep my mind to positive and thankful.
~Teacher Sheila
I\'m very emotional person.
>> I\'m a very emotional person.
When I saw the clear blue-sky, It makes me happy.
>>When I see the clear blue sky, it makes me happy.
OR>>Seeing the clear blue sky makes me happy.
And I heard my favorite songs or watching beautiful movies like \'About times\'.It makes me happy!
>>And when I hear my favorite songs or watching beautiful movies like \"About Times\", It makes me happy.
OR>> And hearing my favorite songs or watching beautiful movies like \"About Times\" makes me happy.
Sometime I read the book that wrote by Hegasino gaico (I\'m not sure what is correctly spell that writer\'s name.)
>>Sometimes, I read the book that was written by Hegashino Geico.
OR>>Sometimes, I read books written by Hegashino Geico.
Recently, I read the novel named \'miracles of the namiya store\'
>>Recently, I read a novel named \"Miracles of the Namiya Store\".
OR>>Recently, I read a novel entitled \"Miracles of the Namiya Store\".
It gave me touching and hearty.
>>It was touching and emotional.
OR>>It gave me goosebumps and I was emotional.
Someday, My friend makes me happy.
>>Other days, my friend makes me happy.
OR>>Other days, my friends make me happy.
Someday, My Lord makes me happy.(Thanks God.)
>>Other days, My Lord makes me happy.
OR>>All the time, the Lord makes me happy.
The small thing make me happy.
>>The small thing makes me happy.
OR>>The small things make me happy.
And I always keep my mind to positive and thankful.
>>And I always keep my mind positive and thankful.
OR>>And I always think positive and thankful.
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