What makes you happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am happy as I have time with my wife. we have watching movies, walking, drinking coffee together and so on.
And I feel happy when I do what I like. especially, when I travel other countries, I am happy.
In addition, Shopping the items that I like have me happy. For example, Suit. I like buying tailor Suit.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework tonight! You are good in expressing yourself through writing. Keep up the good work!
Until the next one! :)
See you in class! ^-^
~Teacher Sheila
>>I am happy when I spend my time with wife.
OR>>I am happy when I have time for my wife.
we have watching movies, walking, drinking coffee together and so on.
>>We have fun watching movies, walking, drinking coffee together, and so on.
And I feel happy when I do what I like. especially, when I travel other countries,
>>And I feel happy when I do what I like especially when I travel to other countries.
I am happy.
>>CORRECT
In addition, Shopping the items that I like have me happy.
>>In addition, shopping certain items that I like makes me happy.
For example, Suit. I like buying tailor Suit.
>>For example, I like buying tailored suit.
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