What makes you happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
I feel makes happy thing is
1. playing with father because
father is fun and i loves my father
2.playes longboard
because i am feel cool and fun!!
so i loves play with father and play the longboard!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello again [이름]! ^^
Thank you so much for doing your homework. ^^
See you later~
- T. Rina ^^
1. I feel makes happy thing is
>> The things that make me happy are:
2. 1. playing with father because father is fun and i loves my father
>> First, playing with my father makes me happy because he is fun and I love him.
3. 2.playes longboard because i am feel cool and fun!!
>> Second, playing longboard makes me happy because it makes me feel cool and it is fun!
4.so i loves play with father and play the longboard!!!
>> So, I love playing with my father and playing with the longboard.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.