What makes you happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
when I think about delicious food.
(for example coffee, pizza, korea food et cetera)
It\'s way to relieve stress.
additionally, I make plans to go out with my wife everyweekend.
I go there eating delicious food and watching gorgeous view.
First of all, I think everyday things make me the happiest.
and I try to live positively everyday. thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]! You did great in your homework today! Just be careful on capitalizing the first letter of the first word in your sentences.
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
when I think about delicious food. (for example coffee, pizza, korea food et cetera)
>>When I think about delicious food like coffee, pizza, Korean food and etc.
It\'s way to relieve stress.
>>It\'s a way to relieve stress.
additionally, I make plans to go out with my wife everyweekend.
>>Additionally, I make plans to go out with my wife every weekend.
I go there eating delicious food and watching gorgeous view.
>>I go there to eat delicious food and watch the gorgeous view.
First of all, I think everyday things make me the happiest.
>>CORRECT
and I try to live positively everyday. thank you.
>>And I try to live positively every day. Thank you.
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