What makes you happy?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I hope to be a ability man. that is, from my parents, my wife, my son, I want to be a necessary human being.
I always warried about being a disability man from them. so I trid to make a something for them and be a succesful man.
When I receive a credit from them, I felt a happy.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], thank you for doing your homework. You did great. Keep it up. - T. Jasper
Here are your corrections:
I hope to be a ability man. that is, from my parents, my wife, my son,
>> I hope to be a man with great ability to help my parents, wife, and son.
I want to be a necessary human being.
I always warried about being a disability man from them. so I trid to make a something for them and be a succesful man.
When I receive a credit from them, I felt a happy.
>> CORRECT
>> I\'m always worried about not being able to to do something for them so I try my best to become a successful man.
>> When I receive credit from them, I feel happy.
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