What makes you happy and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What makes you happy and why?
My happy things are that is related to me. To spend time with my family, talk to my friends, play with my puppies and cats, etc....... Because I have warmhearted and I like spend time someone who I like.
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
My happy things are that is related to me.
>>My happy moments are being with someone related to me.
To spend time with my family, talk to my friends, play with my puppies and cats, etc.......
>>CORRECT!
>>To spend time with my family, talk to my friends, play with my puppies and cats.
Because I have warmhearted and I like spend time someone who I like.
>>Because I am warmhearted and I like to spend time with someone I like.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.