What makes you happy in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
Communication with foreigner without any heritage will be the best in my life and I really hope to achieve it.
Next year I will go to abroad and meet someone for my business purpose.
To achieve my goal smoothly, upgrading of my ability is essential and inevitable.
That\'s why I reserve this lesson.
강사 첨삭
Hello again Jack! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. You did a great job. Keep up the good work. I hope to see you again next time. Have a great day! -Teacher Jasper
Here are your corrections:
>> Communicating with a foreigner without any hesitation will make me the happiest and I hope to achieve it.
Next year I will go to abroad and meet someone for my business purpose.
>> Next year, I will go abroad and meet someone for business purposes.
>> To achieve my goal smoothly, I need to upgrade my ability and it is essential and inevitable.
>> That\'s why I am having these lessons.
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