What makes you happy these days?
학생이 쓴 원문
These days I\'m making plan to exercise after work.
So I have compared and analized about each cost and distances etc of swimming gym.
Doing something new is always fun.
강사 첨삭
Hi! I\'m so pleased you took the time to complete the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your experiences and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
These days I\'m making plan to exercise after work.
>> These days, I\'m making plans to exercise after work.
OR >> Lately, I\'ve been planning to work out after work.
So I have compared and analized about each cost and distances etc of swimming gym.
>> So, I have compared and analyzed the costs, distances, and other factors of different swimming gyms.
Doing something new is always fun.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Trying something new is always exciting.
>> These days, I\'m making plans to exercise after work.
OR >> Lately, I\'ve been planning to work out after work.
So I have compared and analized about each cost and distances etc of swimming gym.
>> So, I have compared and analyzed the costs, distances, and other factors of different swimming gyms.
Doing something new is always fun.
>> CORRECT
OR >> Trying something new is always exciting.
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