What makes you happy? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Listen to music makes me happy.
Because I like listen to music.
And music is comfort me.
For this reason, I feeling happy for listen to music.
강사 첨삭
Hi Da [이름]~!^^ Thank you for doing your homework. Have a great weekend!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Listen to music makes me happy.
>>> Listening to music makes me happy.
Because I like listen to music.
Because I like listen to music.
>>> Because I like listening to music.
And music is comfort me.
And music is comfort me.
>>> Music comforts me too.
For this reason, I feeling happy for listen to music.
For this reason, I feeling happy for listen to music.
>>> For this reason, I feel happy listening to music.
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