What makes you happy? Why does it make you happy? :)
학생이 쓴 원문
My phone makes me happy because my phone has a lot of fun application. I usually use Naver, Instagram, Youtube, Massenger and so on. I can everything by my phone. And I often use Youtube because I like to watch someone\'s drawing, listen to music and watch mathematics videos.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Daisy. ^_^
Thank you for sharing what makes you happy. I think the smartphone has a lot of uses and its really fun and convenient to use it too.
I\'m not surprised that it\'s your source of joy and happiness. ^_^
I hope you\'re having an awesome day at school. See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
Thank you for sharing what makes you happy. I think the smartphone has a lot of uses and its really fun and convenient to use it too.
I\'m not surprised that it\'s your source of joy and happiness. ^_^
I hope you\'re having an awesome day at school. See you in class later. :)
~Teacher Charry
>> My phone makes me happy because my phone has a lot of fun applications.
I usually use Naver, Instagram, Youtube, Massenger and so on.
>> I usually use Naver, Instagram, Youtube, Messenger and so on.
I can everything by my phone.
>> I can do everything with my phone.
And I often use Youtube because I like to watch someone\'s drawing, listen to music and watch mathematics videos.
>> CORRECT!
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