What makes you lazy?
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There are some things that make me lazy. Firstly, when I’m on my bed I feel very comfortable and l don’ want to get out of bed so that makes me very lazy. Secondly, I think playing for hours makes me lazy too. It is because when I do not anything besides playing, I feel like I get more lazy and I can’t start things I really have to do again.
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There are some things that make me lazy. Firstly, when I’m on my bed I
feel very comfortable and l don’ want to get out of bed so that makes me
very lazy. Secondly, I think playing for hours makes me lazy too. It is
because when I do not anything besides playing, I feel like I get more
lazy and I can’t start things I really have to do again.
>> There are some things that make me lazy. Firstly, when I’m on my bed I
feel very comfortable and l don’ want to get out of bed so that makes me
very lazy. Secondly, I think playing computer games for hours makes me lazy too. It is
because when I do not anything besides playing, I feel like I get more
lazy and I can’t start things I really have to do again.
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