What makes you sad? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Sometimes we feel happy and sometimes we feel sad. Whatever the feeling, it is real and part of living. I may feel sad for many reasons such as having trouble with my friends, having trouble at school, or feeling pressure there, or when I watch a sad film and read a sad book, etc. To be honest, when something or somebody lets me down, I often find my soul mates who can share with me every sorrow and joy as well as failure and achievement. Sometimes I just sit on the couch alone, watching a comedy or a tv program to lift my moods, or I ride my motorbike around to reflect on the past.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]! ^^
It\'s always great to have someone to talk to, right? I am glad you have good friends with you~
I hope you\'ll always stay strong and happy. ^^
- T. Rina
1. Sometimes we feel happy and sometimes we feel sad.
>> CORRECT!
2. Whatever the feeling, it is real and part of living.
>> Whatever the feeling is, it\'s real, normal and a part of living.
3. I may feel sad for many reasons such as having trouble with my friends, having trouble at school, or feeling pressure there, or when I watch a sad film and read a sad book, etc.
>> CORRECT!
4. To be honest, when something or somebody lets me down, I often find my soul mates who can share with me every sorrow and joy as well as failure and achievement.
>> CORRECT!
5. Sometimes I just sit on the couch alone, watching a comedy or a tv program to lift my moods, or I ride my motorbike around to reflect on the past.
>> Sometimes I just sit on the couch alone, watching a comedy film or a tv program to lift my mood, or I ride my motorbike around to reflect on the past.
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