What makes you sleepy?
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I’m sleepy almost every night and I usually sleep well at night but every once in a while, I was not sleepy for example, when I woke up late in the morning or I wasn’t so tired from staying home all day. Then I have to try to be sleepy. First, I come up with a story that I make myself. That makes me sleepy and I fall asleep soon besides I dream about the story that night. Second, when I’m on my bed my mom gives me sing a sleeping song while she rubs my tummy. That makes me really comfortable, relax and sleepy.
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I’m sleepy almost every night and I usually sleep well at night but
every once in a while, I was not sleepy for example, when I woke up late
in the morning or I wasn’t so tired from staying home all day. Then I
have to try to be sleepy. First, I come up with a story that I make
myself. That makes me sleepy and I fall asleep soon besides I dream
about the story that night. Second, when I’m on my bed my mom gives me
sing a sleeping song while she rubs my tummy. That makes me really
comfortable, relax and sleepy.
>> I’m sleepy almost every night and I usually sleep well at night but once in a while, I was not sleepy ,for example, when I wake up late
in the morning or I wasn’t so tired from staying home all day. Then I
have to try to be sleepy. First, I come up with a story that I make
myself. That makes me sleepy and I fall asleep soon besides I dream
about the story that night. Second, when I’m on my bed my mom sings a sleepy song while she rubs my tummy. That makes me really
comfortable, relax and sleepy.
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