What makes you smile today?
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Today two things made me smile. Firstly, new clothes made me smile the reason is that I actually wanted to get a new jacket and a shirt for Autumn then my mom got me a new fancy jacket and a shirt at Nike store. They all very suited on me. I’m going to wear them tomorrow. Secondly, during the lunch time at school, I was playing at the playground and I climbed the top of the jungle gym. I felt like I was on top of a skyscrape. It was so breezy. I love this time of year with this fall breeze.
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See you later ^^
T. DON
Today two things made me smile. Firstly, new clothes made me smile the
reason is that I actually wanted to get a new jacket and a shirt for
Autumn then my mom got me a new fancy jacket and a shirt at Nike store.
They all very suited on me. I’m going to wear them tomorrow. Secondly,
during the lunch time at school, I was playing at the playground and I
climbed the top of the jungle gym. I felt like I was on top of a
skyscrape. It was so breezy. I love this time of year with this fall
breeze.
>> Today, two things made me smile. Firstly, new clothes made me smile, the
reason is that I actually wanted to get a new jacket and a shirt for
Autumn then my mom got me a new fancy jacket and a shirt at Nike store.
They all suit me well. I’m going to wear them tomorrow. Secondly,
during lunch time at school, I was playing at the playground and I
climbed at the top of the jungle gym. I felt like I was on top of a
skyscraper. It was so breezy. I love this time of year with this fall
breeze.
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