What makes you unique?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ve always heard that you are unique. I thought that they didn\'t like me when I hear that. Korean, I think most Asians, like to be similar to other people. They don\'t want to be out of the majority. Nowadays, the trend has changed before then. Young people would like to show their unique personalities and characteristics. I\'ve become I\'m not a normal person after 30. Because I figure out that all people are different and they can\'t live a similar life. Even if the twins have different personalities, how do we have a similar thinking and life\'s goal?
We are born in other countries and be raised in other environments. We are the only person in the world. For me, it makes me unique that I accept as I am. I can\'t change another person even though he is better than me. If we tried to change ourselves, would we be happier than before? We can try to develop ourselves without losing us. I want to become a \"me\" who don\'t hesitate of the outside situation.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, [이름]! :)
Always remember that we are beautiful in our own special ways. :)
- T. Rina ^^
1. I\'ve always heard that you are unique.
>> CORRECT!
OR: People always told me that I am unique.
2. I thought that they didn\'t like me when I hear that.
>> I thought that they didn\'t like me when I heard that.
3. Korean, I think most Asians, like to be similar to other people.
>> Koreans, like most Asians, want to be similar with other people.
4. They don\'t want to be out of the majority.
>> CORRECT!
5. Nowadays, the trend has changed before then.
>> CORRECT!
6. Young people would like to show their unique personalities and characteristics.
>> CORRECT!
7. I\'ve become I\'m not a normal person after 30.
>> I\'ve become a different person after turning 30.
8. Because I figure out that all people are different and they can\'t live a similar life.
>> CORRECT!
9. Even if the twins have different personalities, how do we have a similar thinking and life\'s goal?
>> Even twins have different personalities. How do we have a similar thinking and life goal?
10. We are born in other countries and be raised in other environments.
>> We are born in other countries and raised in other environments.
11. We are the only person in the world.
>> We are the only people in the world.
12. For me, it makes me unique that I accept as I am.
>> For me, it makes me unique and I accept myself as I am.
13. I can\'t change another person even though he is better than me.
>> I can\'t change into a different person even though somebody is better than me.
14. If we tried to change ourselves, would we be happier than before?
>> CORRECT!
15. We can try to develop ourselves without losing us.
>> CORRECT!
OR: We can try to improve ourselves without losing the real us.
16. I want to become a \"me\" who don\'t hesitate of the outside situation.
>> I want to become a person who doesn\'t have hesitations.
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