What makes your city more special than the other ones in South Korea?
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I think the technology of making animation makes my city more special than other ones in my country.
Because my city is known for the technology of animation, and a lot of festival held in my city, Bucheon.
I don\'t think my city is good at it because there is nothing that I know about my country\'s animation.
But a lot of people saying my city, Bucheon is good at animation technology, so I am thinking my city is good at animation technology.
Because of it, there is a lot of festivals about animation, and a lot of museum about animation in my city.
So I think the technology of making animation makes my city more special than other ones in my country.
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Hi [이름]! ^^
That sound fascinating! Maybe I can go to your city some day and experience that too. L(
I think the technology of making animation makes my city more special than other ones in my country.
>> CORRECT
Because my city is known for the technology of animation, and a lot of festival held in my city, Bucheon.
>> It is because my city is known for it and we have a lot of festivals held here too, Buncheon.
I don\'t think my city is good at it because there is nothing that I know about my country\'s animation.
>> CORRECT
But a lot of people saying my city, Bucheon is good at animation technology, so I am thinking my city is good at animation technology.
>> Although a lot of people say that Bucheon is a city where there is goof animation technology.
Because of it, there is a lot of festivals about animation, and a lot of museum about animation in my city.
And because of this, we have festivals and museums related to it.
So I think the technology of making animation makes my city more special than other ones in my country.
>> So I think this is why my city is more specials than others in my country.
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