What makes your city more special than the other ones in South Korea?
학생이 쓴 원문
What makes your city more special than the other ones in South Korea?
Our City has palaces and tradition houses among the tall building in the heart of Seoul.
Most of tourist make them feel attraction.
Also, public transportation in Seoul is good. It is easy to go wherever I want.
There is a lot of delicious food and shopping and sightseeing.
Seoul is a great country to travel around.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Thank you for taking the time to give your opinion about this issue. ^^
T. Irene
What makes your city more special than the other ones in South Korea?
Our City has palaces and tradition houses among the tall building in the heart of Seoul.
Our City has palaces and tradition houses among the tall building in the heart of Seoul.
>>> We have palaces and traditional villages amidst the tall buildings in the heart of Seoul.
Most of tourist make them feel attraction.
Most of tourist make them feel attraction.
>>> Most tourists are attracted to them.
Also, public transportation in Seoul is good. It is easy to go wherever I want.
Also, public transportation in Seoul is good. It is easy to go wherever I want.
>>> Correct.
There is a lot of delicious food and shopping and sightseeing.
There is a lot of delicious food and shopping and sightseeing.
>>>There are a lot of delicious food to eat, shopping places and sightseeing areas.
Seoul is a great country to travel around.
Seoul is a great country to travel around.
>>> Seoul is a great place to travel around.
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