What makes your family special?

2024-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Divina

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There is not a special thing in my family. My family is very normal. A member of family is 4 people. My parents have not lived with my family. My siblings also have lived separately. I had kept a good relationship with my family. I\'m satisfied on these situations.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. There is not a special thing in my family. 
>>There is nothing special thing with my family. 

2. My family is very normal. 
>>CORRECT!

3. A member of family is 4 people. 
>>There are 4 members in my family.

4. My parents have not lived with my family. 
>>CORRECT!

5. My siblings also have lived separately. 
>>My siblings have also lived separately. 

6. I had kept a good relationship with my family.
>>CORRECT!

7.  I\'m satisfied on these situations.
>>I\'m satisfied with these set-ups.

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