What makes your parents special?

2015-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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In one word...Because, they are my parents!! Is it a reason no more? So they are very special and precious to me. And especially filial duty is one of the best important thing in Korea from ancient time. If I live in that culture, I also consider that important and natural. I think that was advantage. I'm so sorry to say, my parents were older raising a child involved me. When I was young, I was immature. But now, I will do my best for my dear parents. I don't know what I say... When I talk about my parents, I strangely feel sensitive and emotional.. haha

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thanks so much for sharing this to me. I think almost all children feel the same way as you do. Please go over the corrections I wrote. See you tomorrow! ~T. Jessie~ In one word...Because, they are my parents!! >> Because, they are my parents!! Is it a reason no more? >> Is there any other reasons? So they are very special and precious to me. >> Correct!And especially filial duty is one of the best important thing in Korea from ancient time. >> And most especially that filial duty is one of the most important thing in Korea from ancient time. If I live in that culture, I also consider that important and natural. >> Correct! I think that was advantage. >> I think that was an advantage.I\'m so sorry to say, my parents were older raising a child involved me. >> Do you mean: I\'m so sorry to say that my parents are getting older from raising a child like me.When I was young, I was immature. >> Correct! But now, I will do my best for my dear parents. >> Correct!I don\'t know what I say... When I talk about my parents, I strangely feel sensitive and emotional.. haha >> I don\'t know what I\'m saying. When I talk about my parents, I strangely feel sensitive and emotional.. haha

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