What makes your parents special?

2015-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Jamie

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My parents are a rich persons. So I have had a lot of precious things. I think it is my fortune. I always appreciate it for god. The wealth of parents is the most important part of parents' role in the present age.

강사 첨삭

Hi there again Sung Hoon.   I didn\'t know that you are a rich kid because you sound very simple and a humble person. ^^ Anyway, take sometime to check on the following corrections. Good night for now and I\'ll talk to you tomorrow again. Bye.   ~~T. Jamie^^   My parents are a rich persons. >> My parents are rich people.So I have had a lot of precious things.>> So, I have a lot of precious things.I think it is my fortune.>> I think it is my fortune to have parents like them. OR: >> I think I am fortunate to have parents like them. I always appreciate it for god.>> I always owe it to God. The wealth of parents is the most important part of parents\' role in the present age. >> The wealth of the parents is the most important part in their role nowadays.

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