What measures are in place to protect your safety right now? Are they sufficient?
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Good day and happy Tuesday Sir [이름]!
I agree with the last sentence you wrote.
It is also our responsibility to protect ourselves.
We shouldn\'t just depend on the government when it comes to our safety.
Thanks for sending this in today.
Oh! You postponed our class today.
I think you have something important to work on.
Have a great day. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
It’s a bit vague question.
>> correct
>> I think it\'s a bit vague question.
For personal injuries, I took in an insurance to cover my medical bills if something happens to me.
>> Did you mean: For personal use, I have an insurance to cover my medical bills if something happens to me.
For any property damages, I have not done anything like many people do.
>> correct
Since I live in an apartment, there are not many things that I can do at an individual level.
>> Since I live in an apartment, there aren\'t many things I can do as an individual.
For driving, I always try to wear seat belts.
>> correct
>> When driving, I always fasten my seat belts.
At the workplace, there are some company policies and guidelines to protect employees.
>> correct
Employees are encouraged to report to the leadership any dangerous things, incidents, or risks.
>> Did you mean: Employees are encouraged to report to the leader any dangerous things, incidents or risks.
>> Employees are encouraged to report to their supervisors any dangerous things, incidents or risks.
The company also welcome any suggestions from employees for preventive measures to ensure that employees return home safely after work.
>> correct
>> The company also welcome any suggestions from employees for preventive measures to ensure that their workers return home safe.
Korea is a relatively safe country and you will feel no worries and don’t face any trouble when you walk on the street late at night.
>> Korea is a relatively safe country and you won\'t be worried and won\'t face any trouble when you walk on the street late at night.
However, I tend to not stay late outside.
>> However, I tend not to stay late outside.
The government should provide its citizens with a safe environment, but we also have to protect ourselves because the safeguard designed by it is not perfect.
>> correct
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