What memory in your life would you want to forget and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want to forget any memories about me in my life.
Of course there are some memory that I want to forget, but I think all of my memories are important.
Also if I remeber all of my memories, I can share it with my friends if they talk about it.
So I don\'t want to forget any memories about me in my life.
강사 첨삭
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All memories in our life are important. They all serve their own purpose. It makes us who we are today.
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I don\'t want to forget any memories about me in my life.
>> I don\'t want to forget any memories in my life.
Of course there are some memory that I want to forget, but I think all of my memories are important.
>> Of course, there are some memories that I want to forget, but I think that all of those are still important.
Also if I remeber all of my memories, I can share it with my friends if they talk about it.
>>Also, if I remember all of my memories, I can share it with my friends when we talk.
So I don\'t want to forget any memories about me in my life.
>> So, I don\'t want to forget any memories in my life.
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