What memory is your happiest? (why? explain)
학생이 쓴 원문
Traveling abroad is my happiest memory.
Because there was no duties, no works and no people who bother me.
What i had to there is enjoying that time, seeing beautiful attractions and eating delicious food.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
Traveling abroad is my happiest memory.
>>CORRECT
Because there was no duties, no works and no people who bother me.
>>Because I had no duties, no work and no people who would bother me.
What i had to there is enjoying that time, seeing beautiful attractions and eating delicious food.
>> What I had to there was to enjoy that time, see beautiful attractions and eat delicious food.
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