What might happen if you don’t use any phones in a day, week, month, or year?

2024-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ryka

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If I couldn\'t use a smart phone further, I would feel a anxiety during a short time. Because, I have done almost everything through the smart phone. However, I would be adjusted soon.

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Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

If I couldn\'t use a smart phone further, I would feel a anxiety during a short time. Because, I have done almost everything through the smart phone.
>> If I couldn\'t use a smartphone anymore, I would feel some anxiety for a short time because I do almost everything through my smartphone.

However, I would be adjusted soon.
>> However, I believe I would adjust soon.

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