What might help you improve performance at work?
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Relationship with coworkers might help me improve performance at work.
The relationship don't mean that I am intimate with coworkers only.
The relationship should have warm attitude, but strict attitude.
The important thing is to maintain proper distances.
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Relationship with coworkers might help me improve performance at work.
>> Relationship with coworkers might help me improve my performance at work.
The relationship don\'t mean that I am intimate with coworkers only.
>> The relationship I am talking about doesn\'t mean that I am intimate with coworkers only.
The relationship should have warm attitude, but strict attitude.
>> People should maintain a warm but strict relationship.
The important thing is to maintain proper distances.
>> Correct.
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