what motivate me to learn English

Good morning Kim!

Thank you for doing your homework. I really appreciate your time and effort. I hope that you will always be motivated to learn English.^^ See you!

~Kelly^^

About two years ago, I traveled Europe for a month.

>> Correct.

>> or: About two years ago, I traveled to Europe for a month.

During the trip , I really wanted to talk with foreigners about many things.

>> During the trip, I really wanted to talk with foreigners about many things.

But I couldn\'t to do it.

>> But I couldn\'t do it.
So it was first time that I motivate to learn English. 

>> So, it was the first time that I became motivated to learn English.
And earlier this week I am offered the job that relate to my major and give a chance to work in Australia.

>> And earlier this week I was offered a job that is related to my major and this gives me a chance to work in Australia.

it\'s also motivate me to learn English.
>> It also motivates me to learn English.
But when I am offered this job. I agonized over whether to take this job or not.

>> But when I was offered this job, I agonized over whether to take it or not.  

Because this job could be amazing career.

>> Because this job could be an amazing career.

But if I go to Australia, I need to live on offshore plant.

>> Correct.

( I think it could be hard to you to understand.

>> (I think it could be hard to you to understand it.  

First of all, as I said my major is Naval architecture and Ocean engineering.

>> Correct.

So it\'s familiar to me. Do you know offshore plant?

>> Correct.

it\'s structure that build on the sea to dig the ocean floor and to find out oil or gas.)

>> Its structure is build on the sea to dig the ocean floor and to find/get oil or gas.)

it means if I decide to do this job I endure situation that I live and work on the sea and I can\'t easily get out of that place.

>> It means if I decide to do this job, I have to endure living and working on the sea and I can\'t easily get out of that place.