what motivate you to study english?
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Hello there!
Thank you for answering your first homework with me. I\'m glad to know that you have passion for English. Keep it up and keep exploring different countries to meet people. Anyway, kindly go over my corrections please. Have a good day~
~KeLLy~
I\'ve been curious about differnt lands and people from childhood.
>> I\'ve been curious about different places and people since childhood.
I like learning new world.
>> I like exploring new places.
so when I was a high school srudent. I decided to join the after school class for learning china and chinese.
>> So, when I was a high school student, I decided to enroll in a Chinese class.
but it was soon closed becasuse very few students apply that class
>> But the class was soon closed because there were very few students.
I was very dissappointed .but later I could get the other Japanese language class.
>> I was very disappointed but later I enrolled in a Japanese language class.
it was very interesting to me that i could speak other language like an alien
>> It was very interesting to me because I could speak another language.
later I could make many japnese friends throught the exchange student program.
>> Later, I made many Japanese friends through the exchange student program.
I wanna know much more diffent lands and meet more many friends
>> I want to learn more about different countries and meet more friends.
so I chose this language, English
>> So I chose the English language.
>> or: So I chose to learn English.
it is easy to let me know and get information directly what happen in the world
>> It is easy for me to get information about what is happening around the world.
that\'s why I study English and my lake of speaking is one more reason
>> Did you mean: That\'s why I study English and to improve my speaking skill.
Now I teach many studints grammar and reading
>> Now, I teach many students grammar and reading.
I need more skills
>> Correct.
>> or: I need to enhance my skills.
these days I consider entering the university in Australia
>> These days, I consider entering the University of Australia.
>> or: Now, I\'m thinking of enrolling in the University of Australia.
three months ago I was in Australia
>> Correct.
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i had lived in AU for 2years for tour
>> I lived in Australia for two years.
>> I have lived in Australia for two years.
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