What motivated you to go to the gym?

2018-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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I like to exercise alone quietly than hang out with people. And, because I don't have to on time to go to the gym , I feel comfortable when I am busy. Best of all, I like be alone.

강사 첨삭

I like to exercise alone quietly than hang out with people.

>> I like exercising alone and quietly than hanging out with other people.

 And, because I don\'t have to on time to go to the gym ,

>> And so that I don\'t have to be on time to go to the gym.


 I feel comfortable when I am busy.

>> CORRECT

 Best of all, I like be alone.

>> And the best of all is I like being alone.



Wow, me too! ^^ I like being alone.

I want it\'s just me and my music whenever I workout in the gym kkk 

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