What motivates you?
학생이 쓴 원문
What motivates you?
Money makes me motivated to work hard.
I can be happy with my family and my girlfriend with money.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework again!
A lot of people need money in order to satisfy their daily needs. Also, it would feel great to have enough money to spend for the hard work you have done.
See you next time!
~T.Ysabelle
Money makes me motivated to work hard.
>>Money motivates me to work hard.
I can be happy with my family and my girlfriend with money.
>>CORRECT
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