What motivates you to learn English?

Hi there [이름]!

Thank you very much for transferring your homework from your notebook to the composition board. I appreciate your effort. Anyway, I hope that you will enjoy learning English with me.^^ If you have questions and suggestions, feel free to tell me in the class. Have a great afternoon!

~Kelly^^

There are 2reasonsv why I want to learn English.

>> There are two reasons why I want to learn English.

The first reason is I could make foreign friends by using English.

>> The first reason is, I could make foreign friends by using English.

When I went to Philippines and Canada, I met many foreign friends.

>> When I went to the Philippines and Canada, I met many foreign friends.

I haven\'t thought whether I could make friends or not because I thoght my English skill was so bad and didn\'t have confidence.

>> I haven\'t thought whether I could make friends or not because I thought my English skill was so bad and didn\'t have confidence in speaking.

However, after I knew how to speak and write English, I could hang out with foreign firends and be getting better my English skill.

>> However, after learning how to speak and write in English, I started hanging out with foreign firends and it improved my English skill.
The second reason is English made me have broad outlook.

>> The second reason is, English has taught me to have a broad outlook in many things.

We can experience different culture and their mimd.

>> We can experience different cultures and traditions.

For example, I feel that I can understand their thought by listening foreign music.

>> For example, I feel that I can understand their thoughts by listening to foreign music.

Before I haven\'t learned English, I couldn\'t uderstand what they want to say something and express their feeling in the lyrics.

>> Before I learned English, I couldn\'t understand what they want to say and express their feelings through songs.

Now, I know the meaning of lyrics and feeling.

>> Now, I understand the meaning of different song lyrics.

I feel that if I learn English hard, then I can get a lot of benefits, so I will keep learning English.

>> I feel that if I learn English hard, then I can get a lot of benefits from it, so I will keep learning it.