What motivates you to work hard? Explain.
학생이 쓴 원문
Generally speaking, working hard is a sense of process.
It is essential to live and makes us an accomplishment .
And it can make a dream come true.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jimin!
There are expressions here that we have to be familiar with.
We can use them in other examples.
Practice is the important thing.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Generally speaking, working hard is a sense of process.
>> Generally speaking, working hard is a process.
It is essential to live and makes us an accomplishment .
It is essential to live and makes us an accomplishment .
>> It is essential in our lives and it makes us feel accomplished.
And it can make a dream come true.
>> It can also help us make our dreams come true.
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