What motivates you to work in the customer service department of Bloomberg?
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Tech-based customer service in the global financial market and aspiration for a career at Bloomberg motivates me. The customer service works as front-line support of global Bloomberg technology. My previous client service experience allowed me to grasp the nuances of different cultures. On top of expanding multilingual expertise, working at Bloomberg would expose me to technology. UI changes every day and software updates every month, which need tracking. This environment would lead customer service to expand the learning curve by exposing to leading technology which will be challenging yet motivating. Also, I would ground a foundation at Bloomberg from the customer-centric nature. Working in customer service would allow me to customer base and extensive product portfolio. At Dow Jones, I increased the customer base to 70% through troubleshooting and customer feedback. I believe the customer-oriented environment will allow me to anticipate issues, provide value, and build a relation
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Tech-based customer service in the global financial market and aspiration for a career at Bloomberg motivates me.
>>> correct
The customer service works as front-line support of global Bloomberg technology.
>>> The customer service works as the front-line support of global Bloomberg technology.
My previous client service experience allowed me to grasp the nuances of different cultures.
>>> correct
On top of expanding multilingual expertise, working at Bloomberg would expose me to technology.
>>> correct
UI changes every day and software updates every month, which need tracking.
>>> OR: UI changes every day and software updates every month, which needs consistent tracking.
This environment would lead customer service to expand the learning curve by exposing to leading technology which will be challenging yet motivating.
>>> correct
Also, I would ground a foundation at Bloomberg from the customer-centric nature.
>>> correct
Working in customer service would allow me to customer base and extensive product portfolio.
>>> Working in customer service would allow me to expand customer base and extensive product portfolio.
At Dow Jones, I increased the customer base to 70% through troubleshooting and customer feedback.
>>> correct
I believe the customer-oriented environment will allow me to anticipate issues, provide value, and build a relation
>>> OR: I believe the customer-oriented environment will allow me to anticipate issues, provide value, and build relations.
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