What movie genres do you like the most?
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Most likely, what I love the movie genres are all of it without romance including Korean\'s movies. Because it\'s a kind of boring. I tend to watch that only with my girlfriend. And, the best genre that I love is a film of war. While I watch it, I think \'How people can live at that time\', \'How much it is difficult to live\'. Also, I want to know why it happened. I wonder what changed after an war. It makes me interested in more curiosity.
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Most likely, what I love the movie genres are all of it without romance including Korean\'s movies.
>> Most likely, the movie genres that I love are all of it without romance including Korea\'s movies.
Because it\'s a kind of boring.
Because it\'s a kind of boring.
>> It\'s because it\'s a kind of boring.
I tend to watch that only with my girlfriend.
>> CORRECT!And, the best genre that I love is a film of war.
>> And, the best genre that I love is a film about wars.
While I watch it, I think \'How people can live at that time\', \'How much it is difficult to live\'.
>> While I watch it, I think about \'How people can live at that time\', and \'How difficult it is to live\'.
Also, I want to know why it happened.
>> CORRECT!I wonder what changed after an war.
>> I wonder what changed after the war.
It makes me interested in more curiosity.
>> It makes me interested and curious at the same time.
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