What music brings back memories for you. Describe the memory. Why do you think this is?
학생이 쓴 원문
There\'s a song called \"Easily\" sung by Bruno Major.
(Please visit the link and check it out. I am sure you will like it.. https://youtu.be/sRJ4RywOPvA )
I had a chance to visit Chicago for my business trip to join the exhibition show.
I remembered It was sunny Sunday morning in May.
I called an Uber to get to the convention center from my hotel.
On my way to there, While I was enjoying the scenery of Chicago passing by me thru the car window,
I managed to listen to the music from the vehicle.
Regardless of the lyrics of the song, at the time, I just thought the music(song) went well with the weather on Sunday.
Even though it was playing in short time, I really liked it and I asked Uber driver about the music.
He kindly explained the song to me about the title and singer.
Every sunny Sunday morning, I usually listen to this song.
It reminds me of pleasant memories in Chicago like a clear polaroid photo.
Thanks.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You painted quite a picture there.
I could imagine the emotions from the song just by your words.
That was even before I listened to the song itself.
You have to be careful with articles and prepositions but you definitely have a good way of expressing yourself.
Keep it up!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There\'s a song called \"Easily\" sung by Bruno Major.
>> Correct
I had a chance to visit Chicago for my business trip to join the exhibition show.
I had a chance to visit Chicago for my business trip to join the exhibition show.
>> I had a chance to visit Chicago for a business trip to join an exhibition show.
I remembered It was sunny Sunday morning in May.
I remembered It was sunny Sunday morning in May.
>> I remembered it was a sunny Sunday morning in May.
I called an Uber to get to the convention center from my hotel.
I called an Uber to get to the convention center from my hotel.
>> Correct
On my way to there, While I was enjoying the scenery of Chicago passing by me thru the car window, I managed to listen to the music from the vehicle.
On my way to there, While I was enjoying the scenery of Chicago passing by me thru the car window, I managed to listen to the music from the vehicle.
>> On my way there, while I was enjoying the scenery of Chicago passing by me thru the car window, I managed to listen to the music from the vehicle.
Regardless of the lyrics of the song, at the time, I just thought the music(song) went well with the weather on Sunday.
Regardless of the lyrics of the song, at the time, I just thought the music(song) went well with the weather on Sunday.
>> Regardless of the lyrics of the song, at the time, I just thought the music(song) went well with the weather that Sunday.
Even though it was playing in short time, I really liked it and I asked Uber driver about the music.
Even though it was playing in short time, I really liked it and I asked Uber driver about the music.
>> Even though it was playing for a short time, I really liked it and I asked the Uber driver about the music.
He kindly explained the song to me about the title and singer.
He kindly explained the song to me about the title and singer.
>> He was kind enough to give me the title and singer of the song.
Every sunny Sunday morning, I usually listen to this song.
Every sunny Sunday morning, I usually listen to this song.
>> Correct
It reminds me of pleasant memories in Chicago like a clear polaroid photo.
It reminds me of pleasant memories in Chicago like a clear polaroid photo.
>> It reminds me of pleasant memories in Chicago like a clear Polaroid photo.
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