What musical instruments are unique to our country
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many unique musical instruments in my country.
I will explain about Gayageum.
It is Korean Traditional String Instruments.
It\'s called like Korean zither with twelve strings.
We almost play the Gayageum with Hanbok.
This sound is cheerful.
However, some people can dizzy when listen to it.
Then how about listen to this musical instruments.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for trying today.
You were very responsive in your answer.
I look forward to our class!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are many unique musical instruments in my country.
>> Correct
I will explain about Gayageum.
I will explain about Gayageum.
>> Correct
It is Korean Traditional String Instruments.
It is Korean Traditional String Instruments.
>> It is a Korean traditional string instrument.
It\'s called like Korean zither with twelve strings.
It\'s called like Korean zither with twelve strings.
>> It\'s called a Korean zither with twelve strings.
We almost play the Gayageum with Hanbok.
We almost play the Gayageum with Hanbok.
>> We play the Gayageum with Hanbok.
This sound is cheerful.
This sound is cheerful.
>> The sound it produces is very cheerful.
However, some people can dizzy when listen to it.
However, some people can dizzy when listen to it.
>> However, some people can feel dizzy while listening to it.
Then how about listen to this musical instruments.
Then how about listen to this musical instruments.
>> How about listening to this musical instrument?
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