What musical instruments are unique to your country or culture?
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In my culture, there is a musical instrument called Jing. The reason it is unique is because it can make only one sound. It is consist of a stick and a round steel. So, I think that it is the most unique instrument in my culture.
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In my culture, there is a musical instrument called Jing.
>> correct~~
The reason it is unique is because it can make only one sound.
>> The reason it is unique is that it can make only one sound.
>> or: The reason it is unique is that it can make only a single sound.
It is consist of a stick and a round steel.
>> It consists of a stick and round steel.
So, I think that it is the most unique instrument in my culture.
>> or: It is so simple so I think that it is the most unique instrument in my culture.
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