What musical instruments do you want to learn?
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I want to learn about violin and cello. Because when I watched YouTube, I saw the violinist and cellist playing them. And I felt that is very cool. So if I can learn anything, I will learn about violin and cello.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Thank you for sending me your homework. I hope you will never stop chasing your dreams. ^_^
~Teacher Erin
I want to learn about violin and cello.
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Because when I watched YouTube,
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I saw the violinist and cellist playing them.
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And I felt that is very cool.
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So if I can learn anything,
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I will learn about violin and cello.
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