What my classroom like
학생이 쓴 원문
My classroom is very wide. That is because my classroom have 27 students.
And my classroom\'s locker is outside. That is because there are so many students are have corona in outside school.
And my classroom is very clean. That is because students are clean their desk everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! It\'s already late, but you were still able to do your homework. I appreciate that. Thank you for your time.
- Teacher Debbie
My classroom is very wide.
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because my classroom have 27 students.
>> Because of this, 27 students can fit in my classroom.
And my classroom\'s locker is outside. That is because there are so many students are have corona in outside school.
>> Our lockers are outside to prevent the spread of COVID19 infections in the classroom.
And my classroom is very clean.
>> Moreover, my classroom is very clean.
That is because students are clean their desk everyday.
>> That is because students clean their desks every day.
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