What my mom will cook in my birthday
학생이 쓴 원문
My mom will cook cream pasta.
That is because the cream pasta is very soft.
The second reason is the cream pasts is very yummy
The third reason is I like the cream pasta
Finally, the cream pasta is very hot and I like the hot food
End
강사 첨삭
My mom will cook cream pasta.
That is because the cream pasta is very soft.
The second reason is the cream pasts is very yummy
The third reason is I like the cream pasta
Finally, the cream pasta is very hot and I like the hot food
>> This is a good sentence.
That is because the cream pasta is very soft.
>> That is because cream pasta is very soft.
The second reason is the cream pasts is very yummy
>> The second reason is that it is very yummy.
The third reason is I like the cream pasta
>> The third reason is I like it.
Finally, the cream pasta is very hot and I like the hot food
>> Finally, cream pasta is very hot, and I like hot foods.
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