What natural animal ability or talent would you like to have?

2020-06-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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I\'d like to have listening ability like my dog. His listening ability is awesome. I think his listening ability is greater than other dogs. Because he can catch a lot of small sounds that i didn\'t hear. Like a sound of the gate on the first floor of my house. My listening ability is not good. I often miss other people\'s sound. so they tell me \" Are you a deaf?\" as a joke. So i want to have listening ability. If i had that ability, i could understand people\'s conversation well.

강사 첨삭

Hi So [이름]! ~~

I like that! 
I think I would like to have that ability too. :D
Thank you for making your composition. ^^


~t. Ally


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I\'d like to have listening ability like my dog. His listening ability is awesome. 
>> I\'d like to have the listening ability like my dog. His listening ability is awesome. 
 
I think his listening ability is greater than other dogs.
>> CORRECT!

Because he can catch a lot of small sounds that i didn\'t hear. 
>> CORRECT!

Like a sound of the gate on the first floor of my house.
>> Like the sound of the gate on the first floor of my house.
 
My listening ability is not good. 
>> CORRECT!

I often miss other people\'s sound. so they tell me \" Are you a deaf?\" as a joke.
>> I often miss what other people are saying. So they tell me, \"Are you deaf?\" as a joke.

So i want to have listening ability. 
>> So I want to have my dog\'s listening ability.

If i had that ability, i could understand people\'s conversation well.
>> CORRECT!

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