What natural calamities have you experienced?

2022-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I\'ve experienced a typhoon in 2003. It calls the Maemi, that\'s when a large crane collapsed and people died from flooding. Especially in the southern. And these days, it happened a lot due to earth warming. So I guess we gotta go to find another planet to live in universe.

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I\'ve experienced a typhoon in 2003.

>> CORRECT

It calls the Maemi, that\'s when a large crane collapsed and people died from flooding.

>> There was a large crane collapsed and people died from the flood.

Especially in the southern.

>> This happens usually in the Southern part of South Korea.

And these days, it happened a lot due to earth warming.

>> And these days, it is happening a lot dur to global warming.

So I guess we gotta go to find another planet to live in universe.

>> So I guess we have to find another planet where we can live at in the universe.

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