What natural calamities have you experienced? Explain in detail.
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I didn\'t experience many calamities, but I\'ve experienced the earthquake.
It wasn\'t that serious, but I felt the vibration of the ground.
But I was outside, and also it wasn\'t that big, so it was safe.
And I heard that when I was young, I\'ve experienced another earthquake.
But I don\'t remember, so the only calamity that I remember is the earthquake.
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I didn\'t experience many calamities, but I\'ve experienced the earthquake.
>> I haven\'t experienced many natural calamities except for earthquakes.
It wasn\'t that serious, but I felt the vibration of the ground.
>> CORRECT
But I was outside, and also it wasn\'t that big, so it was safe.
>> I was outside at that time and it wasn\'t that strong so it was safe.
And I heard that when I was young, I\'ve experienced another earthquake.
>>CORRECT
But I don\'t remember, so the only calamity that I remember is the earthquake.
>> Although, I don\'t remember much about it so this is the only natural calamity that I have experienced.
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