What natural disaster is the scariest for you? Why?

Hello Ellen!

Disasters like these are truly frightening! I hope our countries would never experience these any time soon. I commend you for your effort in writing such a beautifully written piece. You are consistent and made very minimal errors. Keep up the good work and see you later in class! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

1. In fact, I\'ve never experienced natural disaster until now.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I\'ve never experienced natural disasters so far.

2. I could only see them through TV news.

>>I could only see them on the news when I watch TV.
3. What I remember is about 2 or 3 years ago.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I still remember what happened about 2 or 3 years ago.

4. I went to bed to sleep at night.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: It happened one night when I was about to retire for the night.

5. after a few minutes, my fish tank suddenly started to vibrate right and left. so I thought that someone\'s car crushed to my building pillar in parking lot.

>>after a few minutes, my fish tank suddenly started to vibrate. I thought that someone\'s car crashed into a pillar in the building\'s parking lot.

6. However, it lasted for a minute so, I felt scared and turned on the TV right away.

>>CORRECT!

>>The quake lasted for a minute making me very scared so I turned on the TV right away.

7. The news already broadcasted about earthquake in Korea.

>>The news already broadcasted about the earthquake in Korea.

8. Especially, it happened in the south area of Korea stronger.

>>The intensity of the earthquake was especially strong in the southern part of Korea.

9. so I called my mother to ask her safety.

>>So, I called my mother to ask her about her safety.

10. Fortunately, there were only a few of victims in Korea.

>>CORRECT!

>>Fortunately, the number of victims in Korea was small.
11. I remember another one, \"tsunami\" which happened in 2004, Indonesia.

>>I also remember the \"tsunami\" which happened in Indonesia in 2004.
12. Indonesia is popular and famous place as sightseeing for Korean.

>>Indonesia is a popular sightseeing place for Koreans.

13. At that time, a lot of Korean were there and they passed away.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: Unfortunately, a lot of Koreans became victims.
14. Anyway, I dislike this kind of disaster because it couldn\'t be avoidable in advance.

>>Anyway, I dislike this kind of disaster because it couldn\'t be avoided.

15. so one of the reasons why I don\'t like Japan is the earthquake is frequently happened.

>>That is one of the reasons why I hate Japan because earthquakes frequently happens there.